Year 11 Paper 1 assessment: Learner response

 Year 11 Paper 1 assessment: Learner Response

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1) Type up your feedback in full (you do not need to write mark/grade if you do not wish to).

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WWW:These are some excellent answers here-the film industry/Black widow in particular.The challenge now is hitting that top level throughout the paper.

EBI :Revise narrative theory and Galaxy

Tatler + social/cultural contexts Q is weaker so revise this type of question 

Learn vertical integration

2) Look at the mark scheme for this assessment. For Question 2 (12 mark unseen) use the indicative content in the mark scheme to identify three points that you could have referred to in your answer.

Verbal codes (use of language)

• The text is positioned over the top of the tyre to signify the challenge and create

synergy between the image and the message in the text.

• The word battle has connotations of fighting and trying to triumph over an enemy.

• ‘Begins off-field’ connotes preparation and a subversive look at sporting events

(focusing on the training rather than the event itself) and underpins the above

connotation.

3) For Question 3 (Galaxy - narrative features) use the mark scheme to write down the main narrative theories and how we can link them to the Galaxy advert CSP. 

The use of intertextuality: The narrative references Roman Holiday so rewards

audiences who have knowledge of the glamour of old Hollywood. The narrative is a

parody of the original film where Audrey Hepburn’s character steals Gregory Peck’s

Vespa motorcycle and he jumps on the back whilst Italians shout at them, a bus

goes past and a lady drops fruit.

4) Now look at Question 4 - Tatler and social/cultural contexts. Use the mark scheme to identify three points you could have made in your answer here.

• Serif font for title connotes formality, high class and how well

established the magazine is (Britain’s oldest magazine).

• Use of green colour scheme (fresh and new) with white text (style,

class, sophistication).

• Recent cultural events referenced in cover lines – ‘See EU later’

references Brexit while ‘Love in the time of Corona’ reflects Covid

pandemic. Suggests that wealthy British people want to know the

latest news and current affairs.

5) On Section B, focus on Question 7 - film industry and Black Widow. Use the mark scheme to identify three ways Black Widow was marketed to its audience.

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6) Finally, write down three things you are going to work on before your next mock exam in December (e.g. time management; revising CSPs etc.)

Learn vertical integration 

Revise narrative theory

Learn Galaxy Audrey Hepburn advert